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Replaced (Poem)

Have you ever felt like you've been replaced,
Like someone else has taken your place?
Do you know how painful it is,
When you could do nothing but cry and drop to your knees?

When I talk, they act like they hear nothing
They don't think it's obvious, but I can't help noticing
When they go elsewhere they don't invite me at all
Unlike before, when I used to hear their cheerful call

Whenever I call them, they act as if they're busy
They make up dumb excuses that show how much they didn't want me
Every time I'd show up, they'd just roll their eyes
And it pains to remember how their smiles turned to lies

To think that to those two friends who I once loved very dearly
My existence is now just an insignificant memory
They ignore me like they forgot everything we've been through
Until now, I still wonder what caused our friendship to turn blue

Ever since she walked in, our friendship suddenly changed
I never thought our seven-year friendship would that easily fade
I know ruining everything wasn't her intention,
So why are they giving her more attention?

Hi! Here's another poem I wrote in when I was still in Elementary. I wrote in One month before I wrote "Replaced", the first poem I posted here in dA. This is something I've been through in the Sixth Grade, and I decided to post it here after reading some comments that encouraged me to write some more. But the main reason why I wrote and posted this, is to simply express what I felt during those days back then.

And once again, please pardon my Grammar, Spelling, Punctuations and any other errors you may find. I'm also sorry if it's quite short. I'm not used to write long poems back then, when I was still in Elementary. But still, I hope you liked it! :)


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